术语“定稿”的详细信息

英译术语:

finalize

汉语语境:

《文镜秘府论》所收《诗议》即传本《诗议》的前半，和传本《诗议》的后半以及皎然《诗式》，对很多问题的有不同看法，有的甚至走向两个极端。这二者可能不是作于同一时期，《诗式》定稿于贞元五年(789)，作于皎然晚期，《文镜秘府论》所收《诗议》则当作于大历八年(773)，甚至广德二年(764)之 前，作于皎然早期。这说明，从《诗议》到《诗式》，皎然的文学思想有一个变化发展过程。这个变化过程，可能与大历贞元年间诗歌观念的变化，与当时一些士人性格作风和马祖道一洪州禅的影响有关。

英语语境:

The viewpoints in Shiyi in Wenjing mifu lun(the first half of handed copy) were different from the last half of handed copy and Jiao Ran's Shishi, even exactly the opposite. So Shiyi and Shishi could not be completed at the same time. Jiao Ran finalized Shishi in 789, and Shiyi in 733 or before 764. It shows that Jiao ran's literature thoughts had been changed from Shiyi to Shishi which was related to the variation of the thoughts of poems during Dali and Zhenyuan period.

英译术语:

final manuscript

汉语语境:

戴震《屈原赋注》的定稿本相对于初稿本,在文本解读与思想认识上实现了重要的超越,主要是突破了单一的人格主题,强化了“怼君“的政治内涵,从而更加准确地揭示了《离骚》的精髓,最大限度地释放出屈原作品所蕴含的批判能量。

英语语境:

The final manuscript of Notes to Qu Yuan’s Ode by Dai Zhen transcends its first draft in textual interpretation and theoretical depth. The book diversifies the subject in addition to personality and intensifies political criticism to the malicious king. Dai Zhen’s work discovers the essence of Qu Yuan’s Encountering Sorrows, thus unleashing Qu Yuan’s critical potential.

英译术语:

copy finalized

汉语语境:

今本《西游记》之祖本《西游记(平话)》,系全真教创始人之一丘处机麾下道士史志经等人所撰。现进而从明代道教秘史等若干方面认定, 今本《西游记》定稿人也是明代嘉靖、万历年间居于江苏茅山乾元观的全真龙门派道士。

英语语境:

The author has already published several articles clarifying that the original version of The Journey to the West of the present one was a copy finalized by Shi Zhijin and some others, who were the followers of Qiu Chuji, the founder of the Quanzhen Sect. In accordance with the history of Daoism of the Ming Dynasty, I think that the finalizers of the present version of the Journey to the West are the priests of the Longmen School of the Quanzhen Sect, who lived in Qianyuanguan, Maoshan, Jiangsu Province during Jiajing and Wanli.